1. Please capitalise "I". 2. Some silly errors eg "a tutorial which I font"; "so I insured to sue a model". Proof read all of this. 3. Pull quotes are not a front page convention. You are talking about cover lines. 4. Use of space point is not a good one for the cover - I would delete it.
1. Please capitalise "I".
ReplyDelete2. Some silly errors eg "a tutorial which I font"; "so I insured to sue a model". Proof read all of this.
3. Pull quotes are not a front page convention. You are talking about cover lines.
4. Use of space point is not a good one for the cover - I would delete it.